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Adams Mum
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« on: April 14, 2008, 01:17:35 PM » |
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I havent posted any of my poems on this site before and I havent written any for a while, but I scribbled this down this morning and thought I'd share.
A large group of women and children together There were smiles and presents and so much chat and laughter I wonder what they thought when they saw us that way A bunch of school pals perhaps who met up for the day?
Did they see the beautiful angels upon our cake? That must have taken so many hours to make The pretty butterfly candles and carefully made cards Were presents that were given straight from the heart
Who would’ve thought that something so magic Could’ve come out of something so sadly tragic We’ve all lost our baby – we all share a pain You wouldn’t have thought we’d have anything to gain
But we’ve a friendship, a bond We just simply “know” And I don’t know about you But its left me with a glow.
A tiny flame that flickers inside That tells me I don’t have anything to hide I can hold my head high, stand tall and be proud Of our angel children who live beyond the clouds.
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davids- mummy
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« Reply #1 on: April 14, 2008, 01:20:49 PM » |
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aww thats sounds so perfect to sum up the day well done
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marie kyle & seanpauls mummy
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« Reply #2 on: April 14, 2008, 01:28:37 PM » |
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donna that is beautiful and so true  to you and adam with love marie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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elenors mummy
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« Reply #3 on: April 14, 2008, 01:58:24 PM » |
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Donna
That is lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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daire and odhrans mum
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« Reply #4 on: April 14, 2008, 02:30:12 PM » |
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Donna, thankyou for writing that lovely poem...now I'm going to cry!!
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Jen
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« Reply #5 on: April 14, 2008, 05:05:27 PM » |
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Donna that is so lovely. I hope you don't mind but I am going to print that off and keep it in Hannah's memory box.
You are very talented.
Jen
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« Reply #6 on: April 14, 2008, 05:25:38 PM » |
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Donna
The poem is beautiful
Well done
Love Paula xox
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« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2008, 05:27:48 PM » |
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Donna What a perfect poem, just perfect. Dawn xxxxx. 
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Adams Mum
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« Reply #8 on: April 14, 2008, 06:24:42 PM » |
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Jen - of course I dont mind! You lot inspired me to write it! 
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Donna - Mummy to a very special little boy xx You are not allowed to view images. Please register or loginYou are not allowed to view images. Please register or loginRemembering you is easy, we do it everyday Losing you was a heartache, that never goes away
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« Reply #9 on: April 14, 2008, 06:42:10 PM » |
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aw! that is a beautiful poem hun! just perfect! love jane. xxxx 
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nathansmummy
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« Reply #11 on: April 14, 2008, 11:16:46 PM » |
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Donna that is so beautiful you are so clever, shared it with my family and they agree and they were not even there.
Thanks for sharing
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claire
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« Reply #12 on: April 14, 2008, 11:33:29 PM » |
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Aw Donna that's beautiful, sums up the day perfectly. xox
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mel - jakesangelmummy
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« Reply #13 on: April 15, 2008, 09:02:24 AM » |
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wow, you have a real talent. If the day out was anywhere near as good as the poem, im sorry i missed it 
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« Reply #14 on: April 15, 2008, 11:46:02 AM » |
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Donnaxxxx what a beautiful poem xxx love char xxxxx 
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